tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2800536115608194729.post895812673945864916..comments2014-05-23T19:22:27.855-07:00Comments on Maj. Amer. Writers Blog 1: Eliotstaciemccandlesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07625346351835677707noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2800536115608194729.post-31802042911743759112011-11-30T14:38:03.300-08:002011-11-30T14:38:03.300-08:00I have several last comments, to make about this p...I have several last comments, to make about this poetry. One is that the usage of mermaids not paying the writer any attention, could symbolize that the writer does not feel accepted by an woman. Also, the writer appears to feel useless and wanting to feel productive, in life. Also, this poetry appears to be an observation of the world. Lastly, it is important to note, that the poem starts out in an lighter tone. The poem starts off, mentioning beauty in the sense of the evening sky and wanting to escape with someone. However, the poem soon takes an negative turn. It goes on to describe, etherization, deserted streets, and cheap motels.The poem seems to be describing the city, in an sense of being polluted and gross.staciemccandlesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07625346351835677707noreply@blogger.com